Comments on: RAWR – Part 1 http://www.folaji.com/2009/05/06/rawr/ Imagination is everything... Sat, 24 Jul 2010 20:07:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: ingram_pilot http://www.folaji.com/2009/05/06/rawr/comment-page-1/#comment-676 ingram_pilot Fri, 08 May 2009 16:41:08 +0000 http://www.folaji.com/?p=1114#comment-676 Wow! That was excellent. And Folaji is right; that last part really does make the skin crawl. Wow! That was excellent. And Folaji is right; that last part really does make the skin crawl.

]]> By: Folaji http://www.folaji.com/2009/05/06/rawr/comment-page-1/#comment-675 Folaji Thu, 07 May 2009 15:42:35 +0000 http://www.folaji.com/?p=1114#comment-675 That's my bad :( I usually review anything you guys send me, but I didn't have time to do that yesterday. So I just quickly read it and posted it, and I'm going to be proof reading it over lunch and later on tonight. BTW, I love the last paragraph, it just makes my skin crawl...! Edit: There we go, post reviewed. That’s my bad :(

I usually review anything you guys send me, but I didn’t have time to do that yesterday. So I just quickly read it and posted it, and I’m going to be proof reading it over lunch and later on tonight.

BTW, I love the last paragraph, it just makes my skin crawl…!

Edit: There we go, post reviewed.

]]> By: Alisttair http://www.folaji.com/2009/05/06/rawr/comment-page-1/#comment-674 Alisttair Thu, 07 May 2009 12:48:57 +0000 http://www.folaji.com/?p=1114#comment-674 Hey bro. Nice short story. I'd like to suggest proofreading it first before having it published, just to make it easier to read - even having someone else proofread for you is good, let me know if you ever have anything you want me to proofread for you, I'd enjoy helping you out. This story is definately making me eager to visit Chult. Hey bro. Nice short story. I’d like to suggest proofreading it first before having it published, just to make it easier to read – even having someone else proofread for you is good, let me know if you ever have anything you want me to proofread for you, I’d enjoy helping you out. This story is definately making me eager to visit Chult.

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